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Philosophy by ~purplemoocow:iconpurplemoocow:

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*written fast to be read fast*

Giving in
To give a gift
Of faith and pride
The heart inside
These words of thought
Of life not brought
To hold me near
Away from fear
And pain
And hate
I wish to save
Myself from fate
I cannot find
What's been devined
And in the knowing
The see-all showing
(Do) We bring about
What's been brought out
Or can we change
What's been arranged
To choose a path
To smile
And laugh
Do we decide
To swallow pride
To take a step
Into the depths
Of life?
©2005-2010 ~purplemoocow
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Author's Comments

I normally write romantic poetry, but my muse walked up and slapped me in the face during class, and (literally) three minutes later, I had this.....

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~loveorhate Feb 24, 2009, 1:54:11 AM
Wow very poetic... i haven't been on in a long time and i was searching for philosophical poetry and papers and i found yours. I think its quite unexpected that i found your poem without realizing that I've already got you on my viewer list....(fate?)
Your poem gives great insight on those that find themselves in such dilemas between our own inspirations and those aquired from the world around us. Do we boldy step towards our unrealized dreams with uncertainty and only vainess and courage to guide us or do we take predictability, forsaking our hopes and dreams for the certainty in tommorrow. How could we ever smile if inside all we feel are empty hopes and dreams. If life has not but one purpose than let it be "living for one's self...

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I do not believe in a fate that falls on men however they act
But I do believe in a fate that falls on them unless they act
- Buddist saying

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WE ARE THE IMAGE OF THE INVISIBLE...
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~kickmeiamadog May 27, 2005, 4:21:55 AM
Cool, flows well, reads well fast ;)

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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~purplemoocow May 13, 2005, 8:22:59 AM
Thanx hun....sorry I quit writing.....:hug:

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What are you going to do for a face when the baboon wants his ass back?
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~666SuicidePenguin666 May 13, 2005, 3:24:48 PM
well, i have just about too, so nevermind, inspiration dies when it was never born in the first place.
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~greglief May 12, 2005, 1:26:06 PM
Never resist when the muse speaks!!!! :clap: :+fav:

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*waterscapes club administrator
Stumps Don't Lie
The Constitution In Crisis
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~purplemoocow May 13, 2005, 8:24:29 AM
lol...yeah...especially when it slaps you during english

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What are you going to do for a face when the baboon wants his ass back?
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~greglief May 13, 2005, 8:29:14 AM
At least the muse picked a somewhat relevant time to visit you... better English than math or science, right? ;)

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*waterscapes club administrator
Stumps Don't Lie
The Constitution In Crisis
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~purplemoocow May 13, 2005, 8:31:05 AM
I don't have math right now...btw, thanx for the fave....my first ever.....I plan to write a journal ranting about it....eventually

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What are you going to do for a face when the baboon wants his ass back?
:icongreglief:
~greglief May 13, 2005, 8:31:58 AM
That's your first one ever? Really?? Well, in that case I'm doubly honored! I feel that it was well-deserved.

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*waterscapes club administrator
Stumps Don't Lie
The Constitution In Crisis
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